Drafting and Planning

After doing my presentation I received a variety of feedback regarding my song and my video idea. Overall I got some very good comments concerning my story line. They thought that the idea was unique and that it could work and that the editing would be hard but achievable. Then we start to talk about the song. I showed everyone which song I was considering which was Jamie T Emily's Heart. They like the pace and tone of the song but the Lyrics do not match. My story line is about a young child who has lost his parents whereas the song love and a girl. Therefore I am beginning to think of new song ideas which I will be posting about later. I am going to be sticking with the Indie genre and with having a song related to children.